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ceenda member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2000 1:25 pm |
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Just a quickie. No direct reference for the clouds so they may look a bit odd. I might get round to putting some detail into the subject as well.
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waylon member
Member # Joined: 05 Jul 2000 Posts: 762 Location: Milwaukee, WI US
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2000 2:24 pm |
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Wow, that's really nice! The colors you used look great, except for a few places where the yellow goes into green - doesn't look quite right. But it's a really incredibly dynamic sky, and a good composition too. And I thinkt the bird silhouette fits the scene very well. As it stands, I would suggest keeping it a silhouette, but I'm sure if you were to color it in I'd be even more impressed. YAY! |
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robotriot junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 2000 Posts: 27 Location: Germany
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2000 3:00 pm |
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i love the clouds! but, i'd remove the lightnings, they look a bit unrealistic and pseudo-dramatic. also, the sillhouette looks like someone pasted a corel draw clipart over a really cool cloudpicture i'd colorize the bird. |
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Rinaldo member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2000 Posts: 1367 Location: Adelaide, Australia
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2000 10:09 pm |
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Very nice. ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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RobT member
Member # Joined: 15 Oct 2000 Posts: 276 Location: Boston
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Jaymo member
Member # Joined: 14 Sep 2000 Posts: 498 Location: Saarbr�cken, Germany
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 5:06 am |
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Hey! Unusual visual impact. I like it. Nice magical feel about it. |
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Ragnarok member
Member # Joined: 12 Nov 2000 Posts: 1085 Location: Navarra, Spain
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 5:18 am |
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Lovely! I like how the perfectly traced line of the bird "collides" with the hyperrealism of the clouds.
And the lightings look good, and they add to the general mood. |
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ceenda member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 8:44 am |
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Thanks for all the comments guys!
I've updated the original version.
waylon: Thanks! I know what you mean about the colour blending. I'm using layers in Photoshop which means that the yellow blends into the black to give that green colour.
robotriot: LOL!
Rinaldo: Thanks! You still working on that cloud pic?
RobT: Cheers, in Scotland we tends to see alot of clouds... often.
Jaymo: Thankyou.
Ragnarok: Thanks! I've tried to keep that strong outline in the updated version.
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]|V|[ERLIN member
Member # Joined: 05 Nov 2000 Posts: 56
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 9:36 am |
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I REALLY LIKE THJE LIGHTING IN THE SKY AND WHAT NOT!
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Rinaldo member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2000 Posts: 1367 Location: Adelaide, Australia
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 11:24 am |
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my cloud pic is on hold due to looming deadlines^_^
seeing this makes me want to do something now tho. |
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Dives member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 392 Location: Finland
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 11:44 am |
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AGAIN WE WITNESS THE TALENT THAT THIS FORUMS BRINGS OUT! |
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Spectra member
Member # Joined: 11 Nov 2000 Posts: 135 Location: Montreal, Quebec, Canada
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 11:56 am |
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If that is "Just a quickie" Im gonna visit your web page right now!!
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Spectra member
Member # Joined: 11 Nov 2000 Posts: 135 Location: Montreal, Quebec, Canada
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 12:04 am |
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WHOA!! Your artwork on your web page rock!!
-- Create folder: named:ceenda
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ceenda member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 7:57 am |
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]|V|[ERLIN, Dives, Spectra: Thanks for your comments guys!
I'm hoping to do some new fantasy pics soon in a more realistic, painted style.
Spectra: Glad you like the pics on my site. Now go to to www.goodbrush.com ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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robotriot junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 2000 Posts: 27 Location: Germany
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 8:02 am |
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ceenda: roger dean is a great inspiration. he really rocks ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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ZakatH member
Member # Joined: 15 Apr 2000 Posts: 97 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 8:51 am |
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Looks great ceenda =) |
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Rog[666] junior member
Member # Joined: 31 Oct 2000 Posts: 18 Location: Munich Germany
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Gordillo member
Member # Joined: 18 May 2000 Posts: 308 Location: Guildford,UK
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2000 6:21 am |
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Beautifull pic and very interesting use of the color specially in the clouds. Good job!!!
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Rhomb member
Member # Joined: 30 Oct 2000 Posts: 286 Location: Finland
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2000 6:44 am |
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Bright but well chosen colors. Nice details on the bird too. I think the background is little too detailed, with the lightnings(which are still very nice) and all, and distracts some attention from the bird tho.
-Ville |
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Ragnarok member
Member # Joined: 12 Nov 2000 Posts: 1085 Location: Navarra, Spain
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2000 7:25 am |
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Wow! It looks greeat! I like the focus of light from bottom and the colorful appearence. |
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