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Brue Guest
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 9:10 am |
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HI, this is a picture i am working on of two people dancing. As you can see there is only one right now. So i need help on the placment of the male character. So PLEASE crit, draw over it or just leave a comment. Thats all, have a look:
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 4:37 pm |
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I don't think she looks right. The two styles clash. The background is far more detailed. And the perspective on the girl is off too. I think that if you want to keep the girl as she is. you should work on a whole new background, one that goes along with the style and also goes along with her perspective. |
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[Shizo] member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 6:53 pm |
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Shutup Tinusch! You know NOTHING!!!
The bg is a photo, so if he adds some lense flares it'll look perfect.
Peace ousside!
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RoadMaster member
Member # Joined: 19 Nov 2000 Posts: 163 Location: Ontario
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 7:09 pm |
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actually I (hey look it's a newbie!) think Tinusch is right, the bottom of the dress would be better if it were rounded downward, so that it would match the angle of the floor, as well she needs fine details, or the backround needs to be blurred. I assume that her arms and edges of her dress won't be semi-transparent when your done. The male I believe should be placed in front of her in a half-bowing position, with his arm stretched out holder her hand. |
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