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Brue
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 9:10 am     Reply with quote
HI, this is a picture i am working on of two people dancing. As you can see there is only one right now. So i need help on the placment of the male character. So PLEASE crit, draw over it or just leave a comment. Thats all, have a look:
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 4:37 pm     Reply with quote
I don't think she looks right. The two styles clash. The background is far more detailed. And the perspective on the girl is off too. I think that if you want to keep the girl as she is. you should work on a whole new background, one that goes along with the style and also goes along with her perspective.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 6:53 pm     Reply with quote
Shutup Tinusch! You know NOTHING!!!
The bg is a photo, so if he adds some lense flares it'll look perfect.

Peace ousside!

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2000 7:09 pm     Reply with quote
actually I (hey look it's a newbie!) think Tinusch is right, the bottom of the dress would be better if it were rounded downward, so that it would match the angle of the floor, as well she needs fine details, or the backround needs to be blurred. I assume that her arms and edges of her dress won't be semi-transparent when your done. The male I believe should be placed in front of her in a half-bowing position, with his arm stretched out holder her hand.
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