[galen]

the deepest gaze of unrealized affection
fall into me, fall away from me


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or you can dream of the frog legs sitting in the church, with the glass and the sand by my footsteps

[Bugscratch]

That looks good, I actually have it as my new wallpaper now, since I was in for a change I would say it needs some more contrast though, the whole image is too grey. And maybe you could change a bit what's to the right of the girl's head. Still, great work.

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[Bugscratch]

You know what, forget what I just said about the image being too grey, I actually like it now that I have it as a background, really fits the mood of the image. Still one thing I would change is the "she's gone before I can say goodbye" thing. Is that important to the poem ? If not I would simply delete it. It seems a bit like kitsch like that...

-bugscratch