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Singa
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 10:56 am     Reply with quote
This is my very first attempt (drew it about a month ago) to a digital painting, I used a wacom intuos pen+tablet to draw it. Please give me some (constuctive ) comments on it.
(The eyes are a little misplaced though)


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Spectra
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 11:19 am     Reply with quote
I really like the hair!
For the eyes, well you already know. I would work a bit on the left side of the nose. (Our left,when we look at it.)

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Singa
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 3:46 pm     Reply with quote
Yes, the nose needs some more care. The funny thing is that her hair took me only about 10% of the total drawing time

[more crit please!]

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Periadam
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 9:51 pm     Reply with quote
Hmm, yeah the eyes are a bit screwy. And you're gonna have to work on the nose a bit.
The hair's nice, but I think it needs a lot more depth... perhaps stronger highlights.

One more thing, where'd her shoulders go? It seems to me that maybe she's just wearing a black shirt or something, but you might want to make that a bit clearer.

Very nice work

-Peri
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