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Rhomb
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2000 4:41 am     Reply with quote
This is the other dragon I painted for the children's adventure game that I told in this post: http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum2/HTML/006189.html

I put these pics there too but got no replies, so here we go again.

He's got a hay fever btw.


This is sketched for a 3d animation project we are planning with couple of my friends. It's a beast of burden or a mount.


Quick sketch of a baddie or something.


Any crits/comments?
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2000 7:56 am     Reply with quote
First one is great....edges are nice and tight and to the point...

The others I think could use a bit more tightening around the edges as well as a bit more definition in the 2nd one...

(Also, this is just to get this post back up, saving you some humiliation just kidding )
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2000 8:29 am     Reply with quote
Woo. I really like the first one. (ok, so I like the others as well, but they're not as polished. ) The colors are really good for the most part, but for some reason, it seems like you've used too much green in the wheat/grass/tree area... I guess it's more just personal opinion, but it doesn't quite seem to go with the color scheme, and it takes attention away from the dragon, since he's also green... You might want to try pushing the area around him a bit more towards warmer colors, I think it would add a lot of depth.

Hmm. Looking at it agin, maybe this was intentional, like he's sad about having to leave his bright happy sunny home and wander into the dark and dreary forest. If that's the case, well, never mind then.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2000 9:34 am     Reply with quote
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Void: Thanks for not letting me crash at full speed straigh after takeoff.
waylon: You're right, there is problems in the color contrast in the dragon pic. The tree portion is what especially bugs me. Thanks.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 2:41 pm     Reply with quote
heeh yea i really dig the snitch brothers :)

they have a lot of that good-spirited feeling

eetu.


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 12:52 am     Reply with quote
Shamelessly putting this one on top in bold effort to get the third reply.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 12:27 am     Reply with quote
Thanks, eetu!
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 1:52 am     Reply with quote
i really like that first one.. it has a nice feel to it.. great color choice. it's difficult to tell if thats traditional paint or done in painter. great work

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