[DarkBlade]

If people want a higher res one, let me know. (I made this one smaller for web viewing.) Thanks!

~DarkBlade

(Now if only I could get it to LOAD!)

[This message has been edited by DarkBlade (edited November 14, 2000).]

[vracky]

Hi DarkBlade,

Really cute this girl.

Perhaps working more on his hair could improve the image.

Just my two cents!
Vracky

[DarkBlade]

What, does someone have to put the word sex or porn somewhere in the title to get any thoughts? *sigh*

[Shaded]

Critically speaking, her hands are quite deformed at the wrists, perhaps even palms. The hair needs work, its almost seaweedy [unless that was what you were going for?]. As for the facial features, I guess they're okay.

Work on it. You'll pull through.

[DarkBlade]

Aside from you I mean. ^_^

[Sergenth]

My advice is to be more aggressive with the Photoshop brushes. The brushstrokes on this pic are tentative and light, so coloring doesn't stick out much from the line work.

I agree about the wrist on her right hand... that has to shrink back more towards the wrist.

And don't be weary of coloring. Layers are your best bet for doing coloring on line work. Make a layer for each single thing on your picture...

Skin
Shirt
Hair
Eyes

Then, when you do that... color OVER the lines! You can go back with a small eraser and clean up the edges. It's more fun than crayons just because of that.

I see you've experimented with shading under her left arm and under where the shirt ends. It will look ten times better when you try the above method of coloring with layers!