[inferno]

hi there

a statue inspired me, but i've also used my
imagination and an anatomy book. it's not final and ofcourse there are errors left that's why im asking for your help.
please let me know what you would correct.
so i could make it better before i fix up.

thanks in advance

inf

[Mime]

I'm not very skilled in anatomy for now, but i think his left (right for us) chest muscle was right on the primary sketch, it looks wrong in your shaded version.
There may be other things, i dont know, but thats the only one i can figure.
I like your shading technique, finish it and that will be great

[Solitaire]

Well, it's quite good...what strucks me is his hair - it gives the impression of,....maybe candy floss . He loks like ancient greek statues, so maybe you can give him crimp air.

[Jezebel]

What the hell is candy floss??

[VO]

Hi there
I think structurally, the anatomy is great. Your muscle shapes are highly believable, great job.
The only thing that I can see that puzzles me is the fact that his arms are as long, if not longer, than his legs are. I've noticed in the art classes that I've taken, that many people tend to cram everything into a piece of paper, sometimes distorting their piece to make it fit on the page. There are two ways around this, either tack some more paper at the bottom of the page and continue drawing off the original page, or before starting, make sure to mark guides to keep your proportions on the page. Hope that helps. ^_^ Anyways, good stuff!

[nightmare]

yes, his legs are VERY short. so u need more paper! right now he reminds me of a lego-man, where his legs are only half of the length of the body!

candy floss is another name for cotton candy.

personally i think his hair looks more like a solid helmet

i like that shading, its beautiful!

[inferno]

thanks for the help, i will try to fix the problems you mentioned as well as finishing the other parts of the pic.

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INF
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