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poxen · Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 10:04 am

YO...
Have been away for a while..but now iam back!
(if you care)
Did this today, painted over a pencil sketch.
Pleas tell me if there is something wrong...
Need to know that before i start to color it..

/poxen

Ragnarok · Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 10:43 am

I like it.

I wish I could draw like that =)

-Ragnarok

zthee · Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 10:47 am

hey!

it looks really nice! esp. his head.
altough i think you should work some more on his hands and feet

good work!

RamDac · Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 2:55 pm

Yo pal... Nice indeed! hehe.. I�ll have to post something soon too! I�m lazy as well.. hehe

micke · Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 3:01 pm

Looks good, Poxen

Very Strong pose.
Maybe you could work more on the hands and feet. Also you could move the eyes further from eachother, they are a little too close.
Mikael

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-Mikael Noguchi-

http://www.katode.org/noguchi/

poxen · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 12:00 am

Ragnarok- Thx!

zthee- Thx! yea the hands and his feet are kinda fast paint, lazy me!....will fix that! thx!

/poxen

poxen · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 2:35 am

Ramdac- Thx, do that, post some off youre manga stuff...
thx!

micke- thx! yes,saw the eyes, hoppsann!!
the hands and the feet are very bad painted, have always problems with them, you can say its my weakness!
Have to train on that...but its pretty hard to train on feet, any tips? =)
Thx micke!

Did some small changes....cleaned it upp a bit, fixed the eyes, and the hands. Tried to fix the FEET but.....misson failed. They look like...gahhh! helP!

Thx!
/poxen

[This message has been edited by poxen (edited November 14, 2000).]

Rhomb · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 5:01 am

Very nice pose and character. I think I liked the original version with the more blackish costume better, though (sorry)...except the left hand.

The feet looked better in the original too. They are just a little stiff and too straight but that may just be due to the heavy armor or thick lines too. You could tweak them a bit adding just a little more curvature to them.

For the hand that is holding the spear, take something similar in your hand and look it in the mirror from a similar angle. Then you should see what's wrong with the hand in the pic.

His left shoulder also seems to be little smaller than the right one.

-Ville

Jaymo · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 5:56 am

I like the first version better, too. More contrast in there. About the feet: don't forget the ankles; right now the legs just end in rather flat feet. Look at some reference from comics maybe; exaggerated anatomy makes things clear to me sometimes.

just my 2p

poxen · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 6:50 am

Rhomb and Jaymo- Thx! hmm..yea the black dress is kinda cool...but the second pic was just a clean upp, so it whould be easier to color...but yes, its nicer with the black,! Then the FEET! ahh..they look really bad...=) Have som batman comics here so i will check them out for feet!
And the hand, i don�t think it�s so wierd...
just the thumb who needs to be cut off..its to far down...
the shoulder...ohh...diden�t see that...
will fix that when i color it...

Updated the pic...fixed the feet and tried to do something with the hand, but i don�t know if its better or worse! =)
Gave him back the "black dress" and gave him some shading!

/poxen

Jaymo · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2000 3:18 pm

Yeah, much better now! Good work. Since this is a character sketch I don't think it needs any more refinement. That's just my opinion, though.