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Rag member
Member # Joined: 01 Nov 2000 Posts: 134 Location: Arkansas, USA
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 4:49 am |
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Taken from a two-way radio I own, but modified a little. How's is the lighting? Not sure if I got the shadow right, my light source changed during the drawing (started in daylight, finished it later on at night). Tell me what it needs, thanks.
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[This message has been edited by Rag (edited November 12, 2000).]
[This message has been edited by Rag (edited November 12, 2000).] |
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above member
Member # Joined: 09 Mar 2000 Posts: 272 Location: marlboro, NJ
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 8:22 am |
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I think the perspective looks a little odd. fix that and it would be perfect |
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Rag member
Member # Joined: 01 Nov 2000 Posts: 134 Location: Arkansas, USA
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 3:23 pm |
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Thanks Above,
I'll trim off some of the bottom portion and see if that helps. Right now it almost has the fisheye look to it. |
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Striker member
Member # Joined: 20 Feb 2000 Posts: 152 Location: Oklahoma, USA
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 9:00 pm |
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ummm.. is the vertical text next to the radio supposed to say *mircrosend* instead of microsend? Anyway.. thats the only real problem I saw with it. Umm.. well actually I just noticed that the top back left corner (by the knob) is kind of out of perspective with things, might want to pull it back just a tiny bit. |
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Rag member
Member # Joined: 01 Nov 2000 Posts: 134 Location: Arkansas, USA
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 11:01 am |
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Hey, you're right Striker. Didn't even notice the typo was too worried about the radio I guess. Anyway, this was just a practice run. And the button, it seems like it's about to break or fall off. Thanks, it sure helps to get others feedback because they haven't been staring at the thing for a couple of hours. Appreciate it. I won't post the fixed image since it was just playin around. |
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