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above member
Member # Joined: 09 Mar 2000 Posts: 272 Location: marlboro, NJ
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 7:24 pm |
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Hey guys here's a piece I started this morning just got back from a week in florida. A little rusty, but I would like to know what you think.
And I'm looking for help on lighting and background. Something dynamic, thanks.
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right eye close-up:
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zthee member
Member # Joined: 05 Apr 2000 Posts: 91 Location: karlskrona, sweden
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 9:24 am |
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hello.
his nose looks a little wierd.
it looks like the tip is a ball or something.
i think the flat part of the upperlip should be a little bit smaller.
and his neck should go the other way, from behind his ears to the body .
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Isric member
Member # Joined: 23 Jul 2000 Posts: 1200 Location: Calgary AB
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 9:47 am |
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I like the attitude of it |
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Solitaire member
Member # Joined: 03 Nov 2000 Posts: 429 Location: Hamburg (Germany)
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 10:17 am |
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I don't like the shoulder part; as if he is lacking of a male back. The nose is very extreme in it's length (maybe intended?, even his highness prince Charles of Wales doesn't reach that length . If that's a uniform (could be an old french one), he looks too harmless to me, to be part of higher army ranks. |
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