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marc_taro
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 Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 1:18 pm |
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| Awesome! Tres Bon! Don't sharpen it! make the strokes bolder! Great painting like it is. Only thing I would consider is the composition of the image. It is a bit of and 'oval inside a circle, inside a square' kind of a concentric ring. This is not intrinsicly bad, just a bit static. Asymmetry might be nice. |
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YourMum
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| Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 1:47 pm |
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Gothic - romantic!  Something very different... cool colors on it.
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ex
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| Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 3:20 pm |
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| Hey, wow, that's nice. |
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 11:43 pm |
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Kinda reminds me of a scene from interview with a vampire.......
mebbe not
It is awesome tho.. Although I dont understand why the red lines on the eyes.... I think it would have a certain feeling without the lines.. mebbe Imnuts tho  P
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toast!
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| Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 12:21 am |
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here it is
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tyron
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| Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 12:42 am |
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I think it's beautiful.
sharpening the details wouldn't hurt though. |
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toast!
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| Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2000 3:54 am |
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thanx for your comment guys
Marc_taro, thanx for your advice ; you re completly right about the composition stuff
tyron, yourmum, ex, thanx
Awetopsy, the red lines are a kind of signature . just wanted to add a little symbol to the pic ; the sign is quite weird , it is there to add some mystery and story to the pic ; you don t know if the girl is dead, just asleep or maybe murdered ..
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