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tofjell
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Here's my first attempt in photoshop since I got my Wacom. Hopefully it will be better.
http://194.248.142.227/homes/tommy/tryout-apple.jpg
Very nice forum btw. I hope I'll learn a great deal from it.
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StormVermin
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| Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2000 6:36 am |
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..and this is sucky? Why?
Only thing I noticed wrong is the lighting... you have a shadow casted on the bottom right of the apple (OUR bottom right). Move it over to the bottom left and LIGHTEN up the bottom right.
Looks good tho. |
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Freddio
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| Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2000 4:50 am |
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| yea its sucky |
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Placebo
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| Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2000 2:08 pm |
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| Yeah, I agree with StormVermin, it looks very nice I my opinon, but you still have to work on the texture of the desk |
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TheMilkMan
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| Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2000 3:03 pm |
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| Hey freddio your not that great yourself so you should'nt be talking. I was looking at something you did earlier and believe me you not much better |
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Void
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| Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2000 3:32 pm |
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Milk: Calm down...I noticed a hint of sarcasm in Freddio's reply.....
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nightmare
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| Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2000 9:00 pm |
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if apples could get up and kick ass, this one would be doing so
good job, the shadow things already been brought to attention. my problem with it is this: wheres the stem?! i demand a stem damnit!
woot!
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 2:19 pm |
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Word, Milkman. Pull it out. Heh heh heh.
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tofjell
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| Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2000 11:51 pm |
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Thanks for the replies. Constructive critisism always helps.
StormVermin: I'll change the shadowthing. I see your point very clear now.
Placebo: Desk under progress.
Nightmare: Thanks. I'll add a stem for ya. I did this one after an apple on my desk, and the apple actually didnt have a stem.
Oh well, back to work. Thanks again.
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