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Void member
Member # Joined: 14 Aug 2000 Posts: 98
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2000 1:05 pm |
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Well isn't that special.
Seriously though, pretty nice. His left leg (his) looks a little odd in stance, and makes him look like he's hopping up from that foot (or on really hot coals ) Mainly caused by the fact his knee is up high (I can see you're trying to make him look like he is standing on a hill?) Nice definition, although I would add more contrast between his teeth and the color of his eyes (and the rope on his hammer). Overall, you have a well defined form, although ever-increasing definition never hurts. ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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Binke member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 1194 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2000 3:01 pm |
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looks pretty nice, but as said, I think it lacks some contrast and also some color variation in the skin. I painted over your pic to show what I mean, its not a very good paintover by me =) but you kinda get the idea..
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Bilbo member
Member # Joined: 31 May 2000 Posts: 356 Location: Israel
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2000 3:28 pm |
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A very nice start, i like his expression and his stance.
i'd second Binke, and also add that it lacks texture.. i'd expect a bumpier, scaly skin, with some hilights on several places. |
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TheMilkMan member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 797 Location: St.Louis
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2000 9:40 pm |
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Good job with the retouch binke..the only thing I think it needs now is some forboading ...menacing shadows..something to translate the little goblins look of terror..think deep disney moods here ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2000 Posts: 675 Location: Finland
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Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2000 Posts: 675 Location: Finland
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Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2000 Posts: 675 Location: Finland
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2000 6:46 am |
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Last update, promise.
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Placebo junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Nov 2000 Posts: 9
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2000 10:22 am |
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Hi, I like the goblin picture, whats the resolution? I think a nice background would be cool.
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