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opticillusion
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 09, 2000 7:24 pm     Reply with quote


I know, I hate the yellow rings on the left there too...
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Isric
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 09, 2000 10:00 pm     Reply with quote
interesting image. i really like the far far distant stuff....I guess that would be background. Looks good.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2000 8:04 am     Reply with quote
Pretty neat. I agree, the yellow rings have to go. They really screw up the composition and, because of their brightness and placement, they really draw the viewer's eye away from the more important stuff.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2000 9:29 am     Reply with quote
Thats quite nice although I think the most interesting part of the image - the craft - is all but lost. It'd be nice to have made that more of a focus.

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opticillusion
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2000 10:21 am     Reply with quote
Isric and Waylon: Thanks for the replies, I will definately take those rings out.
Sumaleth: I've tried a few different ways of putting the focus more on the craft. Any suggestions?
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