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opticillusion member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 255
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2000 7:24 pm |
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I know, I hate the yellow rings on the left there too... |
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Isric member
Member # Joined: 23 Jul 2000 Posts: 1200 Location: Calgary AB
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2000 10:00 pm |
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interesting image. i really like the far far distant stuff....I guess that would be background. Looks good. |
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waylon member
Member # Joined: 05 Jul 2000 Posts: 762 Location: Milwaukee, WI US
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2000 8:04 am |
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Pretty neat. I agree, the yellow rings have to go. They really screw up the composition and, because of their brightness and placement, they really draw the viewer's eye away from the more important stuff. |
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Sumaleth Administrator
Member # Joined: 30 Oct 1999 Posts: 2898 Location: Australia
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2000 9:29 am |
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Thats quite nice although I think the most interesting part of the image - the craft - is all but lost. It'd be nice to have made that more of a focus.
Row.
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opticillusion member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 255
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2000 10:21 am |
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Isric and Waylon: Thanks for the replies, I will definately take those rings out.
Sumaleth: I've tried a few different ways of putting the focus more on the craft. Any suggestions? |
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