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Kaput
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2000 7:29 pm     Reply with quote


I did this rather quick, hour, maybe two. This is my first drawing from scratch on the comp, and I usually don't do much 2D stuff.

Any critique is welcome, and as always feel free to critisize anything on my webpage:P

Kaput http://www.majik3d.org/~kaput/
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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2000 7:45 pm     Reply with quote
That's cool. Nice job with the structure, but try to lay off the black when shading flesh. Never use solid black. Always use darker tones of the skin color. Not black though, makes him look dirty.
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Jezebel
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2000 11:04 pm     Reply with quote
He kinda looks like a guy that's supposed to be dirty

But then maybe that's because he shades in black? Hehe.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2000 11:57 pm     Reply with quote
Did you know that "Kaput" is properly spelled "Caput" and means head? And, did you also know that when people refer to something as "caput", it comes from people talking about beheadings? When someone was "caput", their head was gone, rendering them obsolete, as is the connotation now attached.

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Kaput
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2000 6:57 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for the citisizm everyone!

BTW Buttle, I've heard that there are two versions of "kaput", one Latin and one German. I think that you were talking about the Latin one, right? My name comes from the German version

Kaput, with a 'K'
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