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RobT
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 Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 7:34 pm |
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I posted this before but added some more stuff to it. This is a scaled down version of the original.
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Skeezer
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 7:51 pm |
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Very nice image. It has a really serious feeling to it.
One thing I can see, that you could change is the shadow on his chin, where the jaw muscle connects. The shadow is very sharp, there isn't that much of an indentation.
Besides that good image. If you don't know what I'm talking about look at your jaw in a mirror, clench your teeth, you'll see the general area where I'm talking about.
oyy, way to much explination, sorry haha.
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anticz
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 8:04 pm |
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I swear I didn't murder my wife. I came home and there was a one eyed Fabio in my house. I'm not the one you're looking for. It was a one eyed Fabio I say.
Btw- IMHO the Skin tones look a little muddy and grey. Works ok with the palette you have but maybe try getting a little more saturation in there.
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RobT
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 9:01 pm |
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Thanks man. Yeah the jaw line does look a little too crisp. Thanks for the crit!
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Originally posted by Skeezer:
Very nice image. It has a really serious feeling to it.
One thing I can see, that you could change is the shadow on his chin, where the jaw muscle connects. The shadow is very sharp, there isn't that much of an indentation.
Besides that good image. If you don't know what I'm talking about look at your jaw in a mirror, clench your teeth, you'll see the general area where I'm talking about.
oyy, way to much explination, sorry haha.
-Skeez
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RobT
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| Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 9:06 pm |
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*chuckle* Man the last thing I wanted to do was to make this guy look like Fabio!
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Originally posted by anticz:
I swear I didn't murder my wife. I came home and there was a one eyed Fabio in my house. I'm not the one you're looking for. It was a one eyed Fabio I say.
Btw- IMHO the Skin tones look a little muddy and grey. Works ok with the palette you have but maybe try getting a little more saturation in there.
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