[MisterOwl]

Thanks for all the help on the last page. Unfortunately, I'm still losing my colors a bit, but I'm working on it. Anyway, here's the next page, hope you like it.

[img]http://www.geocities.com/nmalara2000/pg2.jpg[img]

[MisterOwl]

Whoops, he he, sorry. This ought to work.
http://www.geocities.com/nmalara2000/pg2.jpg

[CapnPyro]

you had it right the first time, just make the 2nd img tag look like this: [/img]

i like the page, nice colors. funny strip.. its really clean and easy to read. seems pretty solid all around

-Capn

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http://home1.gte.net/capnpyro

[Grendel Khan]

Much better text font than before.
Good narrative.

My only critic would be that there are some lines that go out of the panel (for instance on the first panel -bottom line-), otherwise very clean.

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Bleed the Freak

[micke]

Looks good, man Keep it up!
Remember to show us the whole comic, when it's ready.
Mikael

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-Mikael Noguchi-

http://www.katode.org/noguchi/

[Sc00p]

When you're using your comic font, don't use the bold version for the first letter of every sentence, it's a bit distracting. The bold caps are used in comics to suggest an accented word in a sentence.

example: "YOU CANT BE THAT BORED"
instead of "YOU CANT BE THAT BORED"

With that said, I love the artwork, and the coloring style. This is very professional besides the dialogue. Keep up the good work :)

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Rene Antunes
www.nytro.org
[email protected]