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SporQ
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ok, here we go. i started this for the Draw Club, but i wanted to get some feedback, so i finished it and started this thread. i say finished as in i wanna leave this one as done and start some others. but, please give crit's and feedback.
P.S. i know there is too much smudge, this is my first digital painting. i promise not to develop the bad habit 
thanks,
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Matt Elder
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 5:47 am |
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This was one of my favorite images from the draw club (I'm a bit of a dark knight fan). The colours look really good and it has a great atmosphere to it. Few little suggestions:
1) The logo on his chest needs a little work. It just doesn't feel that it is sitting right on the picture.
2) his right foot needs some work. Just looks funny as if there is a huge vein on the top of his foot (maybe the shadow is too dark in that area causing this effect).
3) His left arm is a little too long or a little to undefined. Also, what is that coming from the end of his left hand, looks like a claw or something.
Nice image and I look forward to seeing more of it.
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Setherial
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 6:27 am |
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| it was one of my favourites to, I love the colors and the strong posture !!!! |
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SporQ
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 11:06 am |
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dangit matt, i said i didnt want to work this one anymore, but your points made me unable to ignore the errors.
1. the logo on his chest. it was totally off, i centered it some more.
2. the vein in his foot. i was trying to get a patent leather type of gleam, but you're right, it was off. i tried shaping the foot a bit more.
3. his left hand. it does look a bit long, but that's a little too much for me to work on right now. the "claw" thing coming out of it was supposed to be his cape, but i can see how it looked silly... ...i tried to fix it.
oh, and thank you for your encouraging words.
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Gecko
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 1:14 pm |
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I like the Batman a lot, but the boots look like he's gonna go fishing!
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Matt Elder
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 8:55 pm |
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sorry to make you do more work :P. The changes do look good though. Can't wait to see some more of your stuff.
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garuda_x
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| Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2000 12:22 am |
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no neck JOE! OH NO!!!
i think his neck is missing. whichever....move on, you have many many more drawing in your liftime. its a great start though. your fist ever? really?
cool. keep up the rock and roll....
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