[Hightop]

this is my first real pic actually....
I couldn't color it befor so i tryied now....
i got pretty happy with it....

here it is...


I know the hair looks strange, but from the beginning it was lineart.... and then i took them away but i didn't wanted to fix it....


comment the site....
you will comment the site...
got damn it.... comment it...

hope my jedi trick worked

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Hightop
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dbl design

[Dhabih]

Hey

Its a nice start. Some thing to keep in mind is try to think of the volume and space the guy is taking up and how light might fall on it. Thing more about the main lights and darks and put less emphasis on the detail of his cape or the mountains and such, because those end up making the drawing flatter that helping it. I quickly drew over your drawing to give you an example of what i mean.

Make sense?

good start though, keep it goin



-dhab

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[Hightop]

thanks Dhabih.... I will think on the lights more on my next pic....

Damn.... You really got the picture look much better...

some more comments are welcome

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