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MisterOwl
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Matt Elder
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very nice, clean and simple. I like it. the only thing I would suggest is making the speach bubbles bigger as they are a little difficult to read. You might also want to change the colours of earth to something a bit more recognisable (you use greens and blues elsewhere so why not here - just a minor thing though)
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osk
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| Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 2:56 pm |
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| hmm . inking and coloring is good bubbles could be bigger , but maybe this is a sized down version so I dont know. I think though the colors could be brighter and more fun, but ur colors might be messed up because of compression so .. oh well .. cool though keep it up |
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Joachim
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| Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 3:11 pm |
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yeah, really cool drawingstyle you got there 
Welcome to the forum!
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Grendel Khan
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| Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 1:17 pm |
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I like it too, but please, change that font . It lacks a cartoon feeling, looks too "computer-ish".
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| Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 1:22 pm |
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MisterOwl
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| Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 2:31 pm |
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| Thank you all for your comments. I agree with your critizms...the text probably is too small and too computerish. The colors are a heck of a lot brighter in origonal form, but I'm not sure how to preserve them when putting them on the internet. Thanks again for your writings. I intend to post a new page each. |
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Ramiranda
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| Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2000 12:50 am |
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Welcome to the forum.Your comic is so cool...
I want to see more pages. |
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YourMum
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| Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2000 1:04 pm |
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Hey, mr.owl! I like that one. It's cool. Kinda ironic comic. 
-Juha- |
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MisterOwl
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| Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 12:57 am |
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A special thanks to DarkChyld for sending me info on new comic book fonts. Thanks a bunch. It really makes a big difference. Here's the page with new and bigger text. A new page will be up next week!
http://www.geocities.com/nmalara2000/pg1new.jpg |
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