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Gru
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 9:23 am     Reply with quote


Madonna in colonna hall

It's my first artwork in this style...


Serge Pronin (aka S.Grundig)
http://www.moris.ru/~stolica/gru
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Skeezer
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 11:24 am     Reply with quote
I really dig that style.

I think the foot is too small you may want to check the proportions, also her forehead I think is to sloped maybe push it out a little.

Besides my meandering comments, it looks great.

You should do more work in that style.
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Gru
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2000 12:13 am     Reply with quote
Thanks.
May be, may be. But i thinked that proportions a correct. (sorry for bad english)
I wanted to show, that leg stands on fingers, rather then on heel...
I am take into account your wish.
Thank once again.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2000 12:18 am     Reply with quote
Hi Gru!

I like your shading style and an idea on this pic! There are still some off points..

I agree with skeezer that his foot is too small and the proportions of the head are bit off. Her head is also too big. I think that the baby looks like a log or something which is inflexible. You could check and correct these things.

Your drawing style reminds some great artists from history. Btw, it has got nice athmosphere.

-Juha-
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2000 10:35 am     Reply with quote
Through 3-4 days I show you its new project - KAK ETO BILO!
(history create digital images in photos)
soon!soon!soon!


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