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aNoah
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 Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 11:47 am |
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I posted this one before, but hey the title didn't have the work FEMALE in it, so I got all of 5 replies or so.
Anyway, critique plz
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macho2k
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| Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 2:26 pm |
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I like the image!
But where the heck is her pants? 
-micke-
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 2:36 pm |
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Macho2k, how narrow minded of you to think she needs pants! Pants, as we all know, are a cumbersome social standard, and the most enlightened of us have no need for such restaints!
And, besides, hot naked chicks rule.
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And your sister, I think her name's Debra....
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aNoah
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| Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 2:37 pm |
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Sorry about posting this one multiple times. It's really just a test... to see if putting the word female in the topic name makes any difference as to how many replies I get.
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Guy
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| Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2000 12:50 am |
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| hey. nice pic. i like the colours on it. the proportions on it are fairly good. one thing though. dont know if this was said in the other thread you posted, but you should clean up some of the fuzzy edges. i notice it mostly on her hips and on her left arm there. also. the shading on her needs a bit of work, but hey. that just takes practice keep it up |
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Ramiranda
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| Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2000 12:58 am |
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Yep,the edges are very blurry.Try to improve it Painting with small brushes and the brush tool. Also i think the hair is too compact.
The lips are very small and the ear is made with dirty colours.
The left chick is very big.Is more big than another chik. |
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