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poxen · Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 12:51 am

Yo...

Fixed the sketch, added a head and some arms, but just one arm. The other one was looking good cut off.
Hes is som kinda "terminator" i think.
Tell me what yo think.

/poxen

[This message has been edited by poxen (edited October 30, 2000).]

poxen · Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 2:33 am

sktech=sketch
hmm...clumsy me...

/poxen

poxen · Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 6:56 am

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

poxen · Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 6:57 am

AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

this it useless!

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poxen · Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 6:59 am

"this it useless!!!!
GAHHH!

THIS IS USELESS!!!!!

aNoah · Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 7:44 am

Hmm, would you like some criticism, or some praise?

Well it looks nice, I think it has that rough/broken terminator look to it.

If I were doing this one, and this is just me...
I would save as and try painting over it with cleaner lines, and I do mean painting, not drawing. You could lay in a metalic texture in parts, and skin tones over most of him...
that way you'll have a very nice terminator effect. I would recomment getting a terminator reference (and you are using yourself as a reference as well from what I read before), but you should still get some Terminator photos for the skin.

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Harnish Studios · Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 8:17 am

Plus, the guy doesn't look like Ah-nold. (GRIN)

Also, I see some problems with the anatomy (his right arm is too large, for example). I think his neck is too long. The torso area looks to thin. Try adding more thickness to his right side of his torso (from that perspective, about 50% of the side of his torso would be visible). Oh, and get rid of the sketch lines.

Maybe you should get an anatomy book and work from that? Or, even better, take some life drawing courses

- Brian

poxen · Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 2:32 pm

Ahh..
at last..

aNoah- I just want some posts....
thx, yea...this pic is something i probalby will work on some more, but i really suck at texturs, =( but i will do my best! =)
thx

Harnish- hehe, its me! =) nooo!
Yea, i will search on the net for "muscle guys" or something, because iam not THAT big! =) And a anatomy book whould be wonderfull! but where do i get that! We will be be painting naked models in art class...so that will probably teach me!
thx!!!

/poxen

hew · member Member # Joined: 06 Jul 2000 Posts: 145

Nice. But maybe you just have his arm cut off a little lower, it kinda looks like you where just lazy and didnt what to bother make his other arm

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poxen · Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 6:26 am

Thx...
...ok...i was a bit lazy!! =)
And yes it whould look better if I hade the arm cutt of a bit lower..will fix that..

thx

/poxen

StormVermin · member Member # Joined: 13 May 2000 Posts: 252

The top of his forehead has an unusual bump added to it - almost like this bad motha fawker gut hit a couple of time with the blunt end of a shovel.

poxen · Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 9:43 am

hehe..
he cant help it, he�s born that way!'

/poxen

poxen · Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2000 1:04 pm

oh...
=)
hehe..
thx..

Tinusch · Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2000 12:40 am

You can edit your posts you know...