[yggdrasil]

well i tried to add some more depth to her face, and this is the result. fleshed out the rest of her a bit too, just enough so that her head isn't floating in a void anymore.

she looks much older and... rather gaunt, i must say. are the shadows too extreme now, or are they too hard-edged around the eyes or what?



help!
-yggdrasil

[Loopy]

the shadows aren't too dark but the face looks a little pinched, like the cheekbones are being pulled toward the center of the face. move them out a bit.

[micke]

No the shadows are'nt too extreme. They need to be more extreme. The face is till too blurry and diffuse. Eyes and nose still need to be more defined with sharper lines

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