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Delucubus member
Member # Joined: 12 Oct 2000 Posts: 127 Location: Chico, CA
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 1:55 pm |
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Hey, what up everyone. This is a new pic i'm working on. I used my friend as a reference and a couple pictures. But no matter how much i look at it, there will still be things wrong with the form. I would like some more "advanced" people to take a look at it and give some crits. Thanks.
Oh ya, no need to crit the fact that he's well endowed(sp?).
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Skeezer member
Member # Joined: 12 Oct 2000 Posts: 348 Location: Lake Stevens, Wa, USA
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 2:11 pm |
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I like the pose.
The battle axe looks really heavy, you should put the axe part closer to the left hand and mabye extend the handle from the right as a counter weight.
Also, there are a lot of neat things that happen in the shoulder and chest muscles when the arms are raised like that. Try and concentrate on that area.
About the package. When you're drawing a warrior or a super hero do you want him to have a little dick? No I didn't think so
No problems.
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 2:34 pm |
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You're not drawing what you're observing.
You got the basic pose down, wich is good, but there is more than that. Draw what you see and not how you think it looks like.
Try to analyse what you are seeing before getting it down on the paper.
-Micke |
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