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Delucubus
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Location: Chico, CA

PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 1:55 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, what up everyone. This is a new pic i'm working on. I used my friend as a reference and a couple pictures. But no matter how much i look at it, there will still be things wrong with the form. I would like some more "advanced" people to take a look at it and give some crits. Thanks.



Oh ya, no need to crit the fact that he's well endowed(sp?).

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Skeezer
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 2:11 pm     Reply with quote
I like the pose.

The battle axe looks really heavy, you should put the axe part closer to the left hand and mabye extend the handle from the right as a counter weight.

Also, there are a lot of neat things that happen in the shoulder and chest muscles when the arms are raised like that. Try and concentrate on that area.

About the package. When you're drawing a warrior or a super hero do you want him to have a little dick? No I didn't think so

No problems.

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micke
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2000 2:34 pm     Reply with quote
You're not drawing what you're observing.
You got the basic pose down, wich is good, but there is more than that. Draw what you see and not how you think it looks like.
Try to analyse what you are seeing before getting it down on the paper.
-Micke
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