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sweedberg
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Joined: 24 Oct 2000
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Location: Gavle, sweden

PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 2:51 am     Reply with quote
An old pic which I scanned and simplified...he'll be a fullcolor-guy when I`m done.



He`s supposed to be holding a gun, but I haven`t got that far yet...

I posted it cuz` I want some second opinions in posing and stuff, and to hear if he`s too kliche...suggestions for backgrounds are welcome!

Feel free to complete him on your own if you like, just remember to give me part of the credits! I would really like to see what other people could do with it.

[This message has been edited by sweedberg (edited October 26, 2000).]
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SporQ
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 3:57 am     Reply with quote
very cool form. overall, i think it's a good start, although there isnt much there to crit on.

*his* left arm bicep seems big compared to the rest of his arm, and his legs might be a little short for the rest of him, but its hard to tell. maybe extend the knees a bit...

can't wait to see more.

-SporQ
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McSteed
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 9:41 am     Reply with quote
Is that Glenn Benton?

Chris the Great www.mcsteed.com
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exo
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 9:58 am     Reply with quote
S�g att du var svensk s� jag tar det p� svenska. Blir l�ttare s�.


Snygg pose, lite serie tidning aktig look �ver den. D�r �r n�gra fel dock.
Musklerna �r inte helt r�tt, tex bicepsen p� h�ger arm (min h�ger) har inte riktigt r�tt form.
Benen verkar lite f�r korta med tanke p� hur stor �verkroppen �r.
Snygg bild dock, trotts de anatomiska felen.

-exo
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micke
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 12:42 pm     Reply with quote
Did you use any referance?
Still missing a face

-Micke
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YourMum
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 12:55 pm     Reply with quote
Hi, sb! I think the whole looks pretty nice tho there are some off points and a little weird anatomy things on it. My opinion is that muscles in his(? -guess so) left hand looks a bit strange. But only a bit. You could get some strong basic lines on it. Would be better then. But pose is cool tho. Keep working, dude! ;]

-Juha-
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sweedberg
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 27, 2000 5:47 am     Reply with quote
I had no references on this one either...guess that`s why the arm is wierd and the legs too short...

But it`s better to know that in this early stage, less to redo...suppose I`ll get some friend posing for the details...
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