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sweedberg member
Member # Joined: 24 Oct 2000 Posts: 62 Location: Gavle, sweden
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 2:51 am |
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An old pic which I scanned and simplified...he'll be a fullcolor-guy when I`m done.
He`s supposed to be holding a gun, but I haven`t got that far yet...
I posted it cuz` I want some second opinions in posing and stuff, and to hear if he`s too kliche...suggestions for backgrounds are welcome!
Feel free to complete him on your own if you like, just remember to give me part of the credits! I would really like to see what other people could do with it.
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SporQ member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 639 Location: Columbus, Ohio
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 3:57 am |
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very cool form. overall, i think it's a good start, although there isnt much there to crit on.
*his* left arm bicep seems big compared to the rest of his arm, and his legs might be a little short for the rest of him, but its hard to tell. maybe extend the knees a bit...
can't wait to see more.
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McSteed member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 134 Location: San Diego
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 9:41 am |
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Is that Glenn Benton?
Chris the Great www.mcsteed.com |
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exo member
Member # Joined: 18 Oct 2000 Posts: 66 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 9:58 am |
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S�g att du var svensk s� jag tar det p� svenska. Blir l�ttare s�.
Snygg pose, lite serie tidning aktig look �ver den. D�r �r n�gra fel dock.
Musklerna �r inte helt r�tt, tex bicepsen p� h�ger arm (min h�ger) har inte riktigt r�tt form.
Benen verkar lite f�r korta med tanke p� hur stor �verkroppen �r.
Snygg bild dock, trotts de anatomiska felen.
-exo
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 12:42 pm |
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Did you use any referance?
Still missing a face
-Micke |
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YourMum member
Member # Joined: 04 Sep 2000 Posts: 362 Location: HKI, Finland
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2000 12:55 pm |
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Hi, sb! I think the whole looks pretty nice tho there are some off points and a little weird anatomy things on it. My opinion is that muscles in his(? -guess so) left hand looks a bit strange. But only a bit. You could get some strong basic lines on it. Would be better then. But pose is cool tho. Keep working, dude! ;]
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sweedberg member
Member # Joined: 24 Oct 2000 Posts: 62 Location: Gavle, sweden
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Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2000 5:47 am |
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I had no references on this one either...guess that`s why the arm is wierd and the legs too short...
But it`s better to know that in this early stage, less to redo...suppose I`ll get some friend posing for the details...
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