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Author   Topic : "Still another Angel ( Dark one this time)"
Hlid Skjalff
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2000 12:02 pm     Reply with quote
Please excuse me my lame way of posting the image, but I'm pretty bad in the technical aspect of html :-))) Anyway - Angel dark.ver http://itsocrew.narod.ru/angel6_7_1.jpg
Please, send in your thoughts and comments!!!
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Chapel
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2000 12:27 pm     Reply with quote
Pretty cool imagery there. I'm not too big on the shape of the center figure though. It looks as though it is overweight. The arms are kinda small in comparison to the head also.
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Sempere
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2000 12:47 pm     Reply with quote
Here is it...



Don�t worry all newbies have the same mistake (I started this weekend and had the same problem)

It�s easier than you think.

You only have to put the direction where your IMAGE (not the page)is web-stored in the next way:



Notice that there aren�t spaces between.

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Your image is really monochromatic...
The head seem from Darkmaul (because of the spines) and the body is... well... isn�t... You should, in my opinion, avoid that kind of "finish" (specially the soft edged of the bottom).

If you work the body, sculpting it with white , in the same way you did with the wings, you will have a pretty cool picture!!!

The wings are pretty well done (I like the way you lightened his edges, sharpening them). It�s obvious that you did only one and inverted it... not a bad idea... It�s a good way of win time and avoid working more, but don�t forget that in art practice and hardwork are necessary to reach the next level, your next level !!!

I hope help you a bit.

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If you want you can visit my first post in:
http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum2/HTML/005677.html

Comments are welcome.
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Hlid Skjalff
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2000 8:35 am     Reply with quote
Thanks a lot for your construsctive critisizm and help on how to post the image correctly, Sempere! Good job on the Queen, the tits are kindof weird though :-) ThanX dude !!!
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