[Tweeder]

Hasn't been a good week, girl (Angel) wise .. and I drew this pic. Didn't come out very well at all, even though it's just started. I wanted her to be more beautiful, but I fucked up, which didn't help me out any. Let me know what you think.



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[nightmare]

hiya! i think thats a great start. u need some bigger paper tho, or maybe draw it smaller. cuz when it goes off the page, we all tend to forget that there would be the rest of the picture floating out there somewhere, so the part thats in the page has to make sense for the part thats not in the page. is that comprehendable? probably not.
anyway, her mouth is very wide as well as her shoulders. if u stick another piece of paper beside it and draw the rest of the pic, u will get a much better idea of how to fix it up a bit. or better still, copy the image and flip it to make the other side and u'll REALLY see what i mean.

the wings should be MUCH bigger, unless she has mini wings, then its completely different. (see how the page ending makes u wanna cram everything into the pic? huh? see?!)

btw, those wrinkles on the clothing r great!

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it's all a conspiracy!

[This message has been edited by nightmare (edited October 24, 2000).]