[PeZ]

Hey guys!

I've been visiting this forum for weeks now and I find it SOOOO inspiring. The talent here is incredible!

Take a look at my pic below...



I'd appreciate any comments and/or crits you have on it.

I'm not 100% happy with the foot she's sitting on, looks kinda weird (I'm a little out of practise...erm, that's my excuse anyway! ;-) )
Oh, and please excuse her hairline! ;-) heh heh

Cheers!

PeZ

[Striker]

Ummm.. well, I don't usually give nice flowery compliments on pics, I tend to try to provide constructive criticism and be as honest as possible about any problems or strong points that I may see. So uh, lets just say you've been warned

First of all, the head is twisted just a bit too far sideways, its in an unnatural position, second, the right hand is a lil too long from wrist to the knuckles, and her right foot is a little strange.

Other than those few problems, it's a good sketch for someone thats *out of practice*
hope to see some digital work from you soon.

[lotor]

Try not to shade the drawing so roughly. Read up on books at the library on how to do good shading and crosshatching.

Good shading and value studying takes a lot of time. The more time you put in the better.

Keep it up