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BooMSticK · Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2000 6:31 am

Hi all.

I just went blind looking at this picture. I guess its around 95 percent done. Only need to tuch up on those hands (hate painting hands!) and generally work over the pic some more....smoothing things out..

what do you think? Something I missed?

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Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

I think her eyes are too wide. They appear to be on the side of her face.

steady · Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 10:49 am

those have got to be implants! nice job so far, keep up the good work

Sergenth · Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 12:00 pm

Right (our right) Breast - that hard line of shading towards her middle (sternum?) doesn't belong. Skin is reflective. Add some very subtle reflection of light.

Face, Right arm - The shading and light glow on these doesn't seem kosher. I'm getting a 2d impression on them vs something very 3d like that right armpit or the glow on top of the left leg red plastic

Hair - the hair should be casting some shadow or reflectance on the face or something...

Damn! Her right breast is like a water balloon... and the angle at which we see them.. I'd expect to see the implant scar :P

Postives - Wow.. you must be working at an ULTRA-high res.. cuz those brushstrokes are Fabulous.. way better than some airbrushed look. Good job on the plastic folds too!

TurboYVR · Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 11:03 pm

she's certainly very perky, eh? Something's a bit off with the curve of her ribcage, in mind opinion.... might just be me....

Transcendence · Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 11:44 pm

looks like she's missing her sternum.

BooMSticK · Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2000 2:43 am

Heh! Didn't thought this post went through. It was posted right about the time of when Dhabihs server went crazy....

Chapel - I dont think her left eye is very much off. Her right eye might be a little to angled, I just noticed...

Steady - yup! those are implants.

Sergenth - yes, skin is reflective...but not that reflective. About the arm, I think you're right. Should put attention to the arm and the face..will do!
good point about the hair.
I painted this in 2400*5000.
About the shadow in the middle of the ribcage and down.. I don't think its wrong. I maybe did some exaggerating, but I do believe I should be there..

thanks for commenting all of you

;B

Joachim · Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2000 3:22 am

ho ho ho, Let's hope this won't be taken down

Looks good boomstick. A bit flat on the stumach and shoulder area, and you could juice up the shapes a bit, but it looks good otherwise. I like the fact that you can actually see that you've given her fake tits

keep'em coming...

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Frost · Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2000 4:56 am

Boom: Very nice once again! =) Pointers are that her breasts are REALLY solidly perky, her calves might be a little big, and there's a little something wrong with her nose and eyes. Other than that, it damn good. =)

BooMSticK · Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2000 3:44 am

Joachim - those fake breasts are a hit among the guys I see...I'll remember that. heheh

Yeah, there are some parts in the pic that I'm not too pleased about like the ones you mention and others have mentioned too. I'll probably go fix it in a couple of months...when I'm not so fed up with this one..

Frost - thanks dude. I agree with what you're saying. Could use a little more time on that head....

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Isric · Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2000 10:35 am

Her face looks like that of a lizard. Un-human and cold. As though no matter how nekkid she gets, she will still be evil, and cruel, and lay eggs in your eyes.

was this the effect you were going for? Its good you did the picture without her lizard tounge pokin' out.

Worthy · member Member # Joined: 26 Jun 2000 Posts: 143

the boots are top notch

sorry so brief..running out the door!

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BooMSticK · Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 3:27 am

Isric - lizard? eggs in your eyes?....ahem...well, at least the tongue part of what your saying sounds cool... Gotta do a picture with a lizard tongue. Thanks man...for the inspiration...

Worthy - gee... thanks.. The red boots/pants were pretty fun to do actually....

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kig · Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 4:13 am

Hmm.. try adding some blue or gray to the shadows on the skin (reflecting refractions) and maybe a bit of red to bring life to the skin. Now it looks like she has full-body make-up.

Oh and great boo..ts you got there. Shiny!

BooMSticK · Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 7:06 am

kig - you got a point. Adding more varity in the skincolors would be a good idea.

Don't exactly know what you mean with reflecting refrations. As far as I know refration is the effect you get if you look through water or glass, right?

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