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ForgottenDavey
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Or perhaps....
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I wanna get with you, girl!...
And your sister, I think her name's Debra....
Joe Dillingham
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Matt Elder
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An interesting scene which shows some good work. I think it is let down by a couple of points. The images is a little blury and not sharp enough. If you did it in PhotoShop, use a brush that has a hardness of 100%. If this is too hard, you can always go back over it an smooth it out with a softer brush.
The smudges in the river in the foreground are too prominate, make them a little more subtle. Try not to have the water zig-zagging at such sharp angles as it doesn't look right. Water is quite fluid (ok really poor choice of words) and having these smudges the way it is takes away from the realism.
I also find a problem with the green sky, particularly with the red in it. Try making the sky a deep red or something but green and red at the same time doesn't look natural.
This might seem harsh but I like the concept of your image and just feel that with a few minor improvements, it could be so much better.
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