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Author   Topic : "New Art (Untitled Portrait #2)"
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 9:36 am     Reply with quote
Here's a quick one taken from a 10 minute sketch in my sketchbook... There are a few problems with the mouth, but I like the composition anyway...



Enjoy!

~{V}~

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 9:55 am     Reply with quote
Perdy

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 10:32 am     Reply with quote
Danke!

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 10:34 am     Reply with quote
Hmm.. I'm not too big on the nose there. That mark makes it look like she has a dent on it. I think you should remove it and accent the side of her nostril instead.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 10:37 am     Reply with quote
Hmmm...good idea... I'll try it and see how it comes out.
The original sketchbook image can be found here (next to last entry): http://www.ramenbudget.com/sketchbook if anyone's interested...

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 10:47 am     Reply with quote
Very cool visi -- you gothic freak .

Anyway, yeah, I agree with Chapel about the nose....only accent the parts which are needed for form, rather than just random value-changing. Also, I noticed the lips are off-center...(ie, both sides are visible while the rest of the face is 3/4)
Great job, love your style, senorita.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 11:09 pm     Reply with quote
Yeah, I know about the problem w/the lips...lol -- Sometimes I have problems lining the mouths up properly. =|
I've always done noses that way...I like very angular women, and I tend to almost overdue that aspect, in my art.

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