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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 9:36 am |
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Here's a quick one taken from a 10 minute sketch in my sketchbook... There are a few problems with the mouth, but I like the composition anyway...
Enjoy!
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Member # Joined: 25 Jul 2000 Posts: 1055 Location: Melbourne, VIC, OZ
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 9:55 am |
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Perdy
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 10:32 am |
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Danke!
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Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 10:34 am |
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Hmm.. I'm not too big on the nose there. That mark makes it look like she has a dent on it. I think you should remove it and accent the side of her nostril instead. |
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 10:37 am |
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Hmmm...good idea... I'll try it and see how it comes out.
The original sketchbook image can be found here (next to last entry): http://www.ramenbudget.com/sketchbook if anyone's interested...
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Member # Joined: 14 Aug 2000 Posts: 98
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 10:47 am |
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Very cool visi -- you gothic freak .
Anyway, yeah, I agree with Chapel about the nose....only accent the parts which are needed for form, rather than just random value-changing. Also, I noticed the lips are off-center...(ie, both sides are visible while the rest of the face is 3/4)
Great job, love your style, senorita.
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2000 11:09 pm |
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Yeah, I know about the problem w/the lips...lol -- Sometimes I have problems lining the mouths up properly. =|
I've always done noses that way...I like very angular women, and I tend to almost overdue that aspect, in my art.
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