[toast!]

hi,

first time i post somethin' on this forum, hope you guys will help me. A friend of mine gave me a pic to correct and give it a more realist aspect. This is the first time i work without any model so i m getting some trouble with proportions ; here is the pic :


something is going wrong on her face, don't know what , i spent too much time on the pic, hope you will give me some advices to correct the errors..

for those who are interested , here is the pic of my friend i started with :
http://toast.planet-d.net/angelstart.jpg

see you soon

Toast

[This message has been edited by toast! (edited October 04, 2000).]

[Matt Elder]

The image actually looks really nice and is coming along well. Yeah there is something not quite right about the image. I think it is a couple of things. The girls left eye doesn't match the right one. One seems to be on too much of an angle and the bottom eyelid looks too different (I'm just guessing).

I think the other main thing is the characters left hand side of the mouth, it looks like it is popping out to much and doesn't join into the rest of the face like a normal mouth would. I think this is primary caused by the shadow cast on the face as when it gets near the top lip, it quickly angles out before joining.

The forehead may be a little on the too high side but I love the way the hair is coming along.

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Matt
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[Jaymo]

I agree to Matts advice. I might add that the legs start where the hips should be IMO, though it's not much. And get those knees fixed...
Still beautiful pic.

[This message has been edited by Jaymo (edited October 04, 2000).]