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ZiG
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2000 1:06 am     Reply with quote
I thought this one deserved it's own thread. Some comments would really be appreciated.



-ryan
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2000 1:19 am     Reply with quote
Hi ZiG! That man looks nice. I like it. Hmm... what to say. Maybe whole pic looks a bit sketch like. You could try to draw more on thinner lines here and there. The background is also quite fast drew. Atmosphere is sensitive. Anatomy looks ok too. Nice work. Is this the final version?

-Juha-
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ZiG
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2000 1:26 am     Reply with quote
Hey,

Sorry I should have said it was just a sketch. I was just burning time and ended up with this. I thought I'd post it and see what kind of response it got and then go from there... Any ideas on a background or theme? I just threw that one in there. I do like the idea of it being at night though.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2000 1:49 am     Reply with quote
Okay! Hmm... I think that atmosphere would be more efficient if the background had drawn vertically instead of horizontal type still. Do you understand? I mean that if you will draw a road - for instance - which disappears somewhere in horizon so atmosphere would be more travelling like... lonely guy travels beneath the dark sky at night. Hmm.. maybe some silhouettes of skyscrapers would be nice. I don't know.. these are my suggestions. This is nice sketch though.

-Juha-
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Skagge
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2000 3:40 am     Reply with quote
Nice work
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ZiG
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 02, 2000 12:46 am     Reply with quote
I added stars, ooOOOo ahhhhh. heh

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 02, 2000 1:20 am     Reply with quote
Hi! The sky should have to be darker at top..

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