[Berg]

What do you think?



Thanks in advance, Jan.

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[Isric]

Woa! The berthin' hips police would arrest her in a second! Just make those widder first, thats thefirst thing that stands out.
Looks like you've got some of the highly important pencil skills. Bravo

[Bizarde]

i like the pic,but i feel cuz you are not very sure in what are you doing,give free hand to your ...hand. start drawing a soft sketch seting the proportions of her budy[i see her torso which is too long]and after you are free to make all that details/textures...or what else.

i atached my version hoping you are not angry about this...8)




~bizarde.


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[phreaknasty]

Bizarde - might be sort of an odd question but when you are shading with parallel lines as in this picture, is there a prescribed way that you choose which direction to draw the lines (i.e perpendicular to the nearest contour line) or do you just do it by feel.

nice sketch...

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[Bubonic]

Berg, nice shading , but you gotta work on yoru anatomy skills the waist is way too skinny and the arms arent postioned on the torso right.. if you drew it from a picture or model more, look at the proportions and study it first, then draw..

So instead of only about half hour, it should be like 40 min.. 5 extra minutes studying the reference and 5 extra more laying down the right anaomty first, like bizarde did..

Your good, just keep at it

[Frost]

Berg: I think I want her for Christmas. =)

Yeah, some anatomical issues there. Her rib cage and skeletal chest are too big for a girl, and her butt cheeks are too low. I really like her face and hair though, even though there are issues there as well... but she really looks like this 14->16 year old girl, cute.

[Bizarde]

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Originally posted by phreaknasty:
Bizarde - might be sort of an odd question but when you are shading with parallel lines as in this picture, is there a prescribed way that you choose which direction to draw the lines (i.e perpendicular to the nearest contour line) or do you just do it by feel.

nice sketch...

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hehe! good question,well the parallel shading lines give volume to your drawing and i used parallel *curved* lines for textures/strong shading but not all the time because is about...feeling...8)
btw for me is just a matter of taste because i dont have any art school in my background...so you can use my advises but i think you can ask this sort of things from ppl who had studied this tehniqs in schools.


hope is helpfull.

~bizarde.

[ThE_JacO]

someone ban bizarde's IP or even better his mask.* =), he's too good for a self taught (the day i'll manage to make a sketch with that kind of volumes i'll prolly be living another life after reincarnation or something)

[edible snowman]

i just remembered they dont shave in holland.... its just different than america i guess.
Bizzarde, do you ever try to draw realistic proportions for the face? Im not condemning your style or anything, I was just curious. (im basing my thoughts on fred's head drawing tutorial)

[newt]

Man, I always feel bad when the new guys are ignored. Where is everyone? In the comic book posts?

I like the pose, the texture in the jeans is good, and the hair is good. I'd work on the face a bit more - it looks flat. Also the shading is a bit tight, loosen up a tad.

[Berg]

It's a drawing I do for a friend of mine...He said: I bet you can't draw a hot chick =)
It's nothing really special, but I liked the result and was wondering what the expierienced ones would say.

Thanks for comments, Jan.

[Isric]

WoooHOoo! Another one who has escaped all professional teaching! High five to the guys who did it on their own! WOOOO
*runs of into the woods howling....*

[laminator]

Hi Berg,

The only thing I noticed that hasn't been said before is that you should remove the hair you can see through her arm pit. It looks like a hairy arm pit at first glance..

btw, like the shading... higher contrast would make it stronger.



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[Dives]

Bizarde not many of us romanians around so wanna contact me? icq 42645643 and e-mail
[email protected] or [email protected]

[Berg]

Overwhelming!

After correcting the face, chest, and waist, I went to school to show the guy this...he bought it =) $7,-

I'll ask it back now to correct her hairy arm-pit...it looks bad when you notice it...And I'll scan the result and show it, too.

Bizarde - you are too good. How long did that take you? 15 minutes? Hmmm...*feels like a turtle* (it took me over one hour to make it look right, especially the face) =) Hey you really inspired me man - cool style

I'll study my books some more/again...I think I overdid her female uhh characterisics a bit =)

Hey, everybody, I'm inspired! Thanks, Jan. (suspect more)