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PostPosted: Mon Sep 18, 2000 7:57 pm     Reply with quote
this is my image of a corn crow.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 18, 2000 10:26 pm     Reply with quote
Is it realy that bad?
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 19, 2000 2:26 pm     Reply with quote
it's neat. colorful. it could use a little more umf in the background, i think.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 19, 2000 4:10 pm     Reply with quote
thanks Icannon, I had all but given up on anyone repling to my work.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 19, 2000 4:11 pm     Reply with quote
Interesting

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 19, 2000 5:23 pm     Reply with quote
I would define the eyes and mouth a bit more. Maybe add better contrast to the whole body by using some brighter colors like the hair thingies. I would add something to the background, like Icannon suggested, but don't put too much detail into the background, as it might blur the focus of the picture, which is the guy of course

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 19, 2000 5:39 pm     Reply with quote
I disagree with Icannon, I think it needs more "umph" to the foreground. The background is too loud for how subdued the character is. Perhaps strengthen his colors or move him higher in the picture. Remember the rule of thirds...

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 19, 2000 6:23 pm     Reply with quote
I think it needs a big fat lens flare right in the middle.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 19, 2000 7:18 pm     Reply with quote
thanks,
amazing a lens flare? this image was done with tradional water colors the scaned into photoshop. the only thing I did to it in photoshop was to duplicate the layer and set the top layer effect to difference and lower the opacity a little. ---------lens flare ehhehhehehheh thanks.
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