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zthee member
Member # Joined: 05 Apr 2000 Posts: 91 Location: karlskrona, sweden
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Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2000 5:01 pm |
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ya.
i scanned a sketch i did and tried to rework it in photoshop. and this is how it came to be..
although i think the the original rez is better..
comments apprecieated.
(after viewing this post i thought, damn it feels like this picture has been posted before (not THIS particular picture) is it the pose or the technique?)
[This message has been edited by zthee (edited September 19, 2000).] |
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wootkoos member
Member # Joined: 20 Jun 2000 Posts: 64
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Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2000 5:08 pm |
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The hand on the ground could use a bit of retouching, it looks strange to me. The extended arm is like a board, make a little bend in the elbow joint. Make one of the legs extended a bit further back to help give it a more dynamic composition. Also the hand with the kneif might look a bit better if it were tilted down more. Other than that you could clean up the lines a bit, unless you want that look (which actually fits the picture quite nicely) and redefine some areas.
Hope that helps some
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