[LimpySide]

Here are two pictures of mine that I made this summer. I was wondering what you think? Is there something in particular that I can work on?
http://tbns.net/epik/npf/girlbody.jpg

and

http://tbns.net/epik/npf/elfman2.jpg

[billyjay]

Wow! Neat stuff. I think you could really make them great with a little shading.

Whoever told you to put up that guy with the elf ears is a genius. That picture is awesome.

It looks like a warrior elf. And he looks ready to kick some other elf's ass.

Keep up the good work, and maybe think about coloring this in photoshop. That would be awesome!

BJ

[Isric]

First things first...Draw from real life for a while. I can see that you lean more to the comic style than realistic, I do too. but even the best comic artists know how to draw from life. Just look up photographers on the net, download some pictures, and sketch away.
Thats probably not what you want to hear, but thats what you need to hear.

I detect slight Dragon Ball Z influences in that guys armor, no?
Thanks for posting

[Seph|roth]

DragonBall Z
mmmmmmmm

[LimpySide]

Isric, thanks for the help. You're right, I'm more of a comic influenced artist. The most realistic I get is this drawing here...
http://tbns.net/epik/npf/brandon.jpg

Oh and that elf guy isn't DBZ influenced, since I don't like DBZ at all. Sorry to those who do.

Thanks everyone.

[micke]

Hi!
You have a nice start.
Maybe you could look at her shoulders and the pose a little bit.
Her shoulders are too pointy and i'm not sure about the pose. What is she doing?
I've tried to fix the pants too, cause
it looked quite uncomfortable.
Did a fast sketch to illustrate what i mean:

Hope this can help a little
-Mikael

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-Mikael Noguchi-

http://www.katode.org/noguchi/

[billyjay]

Wow Micke! Great job. I love to see a great thing come from another great thing. Good work.

I think LimpySide's drawing was great but needs these little changes. Really really cool post man.

Great work guys!
BJ