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Psionic · Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2000 5:26 am

This is my latest sketch I did while I was bored, I will paint it up in PS in the next few days and post it again, Hope ya like it.

Axl · Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2000 10:06 am

I like what you've drawn but I have two small problems.
1. The gun looks a little too boxy and the barrell looks too long.
2. The right leg looks too short. For the position that it's in the knee should be further out to the right.
Other than that nice work.

Psionic · Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2000 11:09 pm

The gun has been purposely left simple, 'cus I have plans for it in Photoshop, how do you know the barrels' too long, have you seen this gun before?

kig · Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2000 12:44 am

Hmm, the pose looks pretty, uh, weird. Or at least it looks like the kind of pose that'd wear out your feet muscles in a jiffy. Which donates the pic some weird tension that makes it weird.

The perspective of the left knee looks weird too.

Yeah, weird post for more weirdness from my part.

Righty-o, enough weirdness for now. Shish-kebab.

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Psionic · Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2000 6:00 am

A Robots' muscles wearing out in a jiffy, I don't think so, He's weird because he's not human and aching muscles don't tend to bother him too much, it's weird that.

StormVermin · member Member # Joined: 13 May 2000 Posts: 252

Since he's an "android" he has human features... so he should have human poses. I agree, the stance looks good, but pivot his right leg so the knee faces outward (in his view, so it comes towards us) otherwise he looks like he is ready to crap.

Cool pic though, I like the shading.

The Dude · Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2000 7:50 am

I really like the pic and can't wait to see
the digital version.

I think you've done a really nice job of
portraying the reflection off the armor or
skin or whatever. The only part that I might
change would be the reflection on the lower
leg on the left side. It almost looks like
it curves inward instead of being rounded.

Thas my take....oh yeah you should make the
gun look more high-tech too.

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Psionic · Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2000 9:19 am

Thanx for the comments, the gun will be a lot more detailed, I left it plain because the detail I want to add involves PS, so I didn't bother drawing it in, the sketch is not followed exactly when I paint over it so certain discrepancies will be ironed out as I go along and he is about to take a crap.

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