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n8 member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 791 Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2000 7:00 am |
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umm..yeah...??...do i need to chuk more stuff into the pic or just refine it ppls??...and yes i know its not the most realistic of all pics...after seeing all those other pics of other ppl...hmm..
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jasonN member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 842 Location: Sydney Australia
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2000 2:06 pm |
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Hey n8, nice pic.
As for advice, it depends on what type of 'look' you're going for. Do you want a realistic look or a funky design type look? Like something that would be printed on a tshirt.
For a funky design, the colours are well suited, but if you wnat a more realistic tone try more earthly colours. I think the blues in the water and sky are a little too blue.
I think you should put a skyline of buildings in the background and then keep refining it. That's be great
-Jason
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Seph|roth member
Member # Joined: 07 Sep 2000 Posts: 261 Location: Montreal, Qc, Canada
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2000 3:13 pm |
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Well, nice pic, but i think it looks flat.
The colors dont have much life to them and they dont have any depth. Maybe try putting in a few shadows here and there and try to add a little texture to the rock and water.
And like JasonN say, maybe try adding some buildings in to see how it would look.
Dont mean to discourage you though, i think your second try will look much better !
keep it up !
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