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Sergenth
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 Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2000 12:11 pm |
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I like this pic, and the thing I like most about it is the watercolor tones created by your brush swiping in photoshop. There is a sense of light passing or refracting through colored material on the left and his face is good for a fast pic  Good thick sections of color, even for the bottom eyelids.
I agree with Revival though... there should be some secondary lightsource making light on the right side of his face as we see it. That ultra-darkness is just a bit too dark.
And for my last shout-out... color dodge rulez! |
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poxen
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| Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2000 12:37 pm |
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Thx...
I really need this..
i havent found me stile yet..so about beeing more surreal is a good suggestion. But i dont know yet if this is my stile..i am pretty new att digi painting, and my equipment isn�t the best so it will take some time, but it is worht it!...
And yes the spots in his face are no good..have to remove them. I don�t why i did put them there!
Yes, the right side is a to dark. Thats a problem i always have when i paint digi..to dark shadows and out lines. Have to fix that!
Thx you booth! Thx Thx! Have to sleep now..
will fix the pic to morrow!
/poxen
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2000 2:27 pm |
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| That's really nice. Seems like you've found a good style, you just need to keep tightening up the image. Awesome job. |
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poxen
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| Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2000 11:06 pm |
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Haj..
fast pic..
time 45 minutes..i am not that satisfied with it...have to train more..but its hard on my pitty wacom and my mega slow computer!
ya ya!
Tell me what ya think..hit me! i need it..wanne get better!
Change it if you like to..
/poxen |
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Revival
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| Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2000 11:15 pm |
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Thats a neat style you have going there for the pic... Here's one suggestion simply from my point of view, with your style I'm not sure if its supposed to be more surreal than realistic, but the shading on the right side of the face where its curving out to the edge of the pic is a bit too dark, maybe a gradual fade would be better, because it seems to black in that area... The other bit, was the six blue circles on his face didn't seem to add much to the picture, it seems to take away from it ... the background is looking good... maybe a further contrast between foreground\background would bring out the guy's image even more...
keep it up!
rev
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