[Krztfr]

Hey. Here's my second attempt at drawing and painting digitally. It took me quite a while because i was using a mouse. This is a Counter-Strike (Half-Life mod) guy. and he will be poking his head around a tree.

PLease. I want to hear your comments.

Oh and please tell me if you can't see these.

Thanks



I decided i would add my first drawing as well.



Sorry if these take too long to load.

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"How can you use my intestines as a gift?"

[This message has been edited by Krztfr (edited September 02, 2000).]

[Krztfr]

cmon fellers. Write something!. i want people to look and comment on this.

[Isric]

Be patient, be patient...the amount of comments depends on the time of day.
Comment: I love counterstrike. Love it. No other Net game has come close to counterstrike.
Very nice pictures. If you made some in action, with actual backgrounds, that would be sweet

[surferboi]

I must say i do like the pictures i think they are real good...

For the first image the guy looks like he has somewhat of a hunch back with the vest looking shirt.. could be intentional cuz of how u give the shirt a thick look around the shoulders but u dont stick with it down by the base of the spine...
alsothe arms n the hands could use a little work.. the hand that is grasping the knife the thumb doesnt look quite right and the hand looks rigid.. the bicep looks like it is stretched behind the back and appears out of porportion as far as length.. the forearm for could use some lengthining in my opinion.. as for the other arm i think its some better then the other, although the elbow i dont think pokes out that much when rotated that muchi kinda like the hand on this arm but it could use some work too...

on the second picture guy on the left is my favorite of the characters... shows great form and excellent shading.. the foreshortening on (his) right leg by the knee throws me a bitbut aside from that i think its a really great drawing..

the other 2 characters are somewhat polygony.. and not as smooth as the other and the one on the right is very aliased...

the background is nice although the depth of feild blurs off pretty quickly in comparison to where the guy on the left is standing.. doesnt quite match with the shading of the characters.. when i think of red skies i think of mourning/evening time with long shadows with darker shaded characters with their back to the sun.. more silouetted.. but thats just my opinion...

sorry if i sound critical on ur pictures, i dont mean to be

[Krztfr]

Back to the top.
I Really really would like some more criticism.
Im very new to using a lot of these tools. Im really just testing Dhabis technique. Any advice is better than no advice

[Jenn]

Keep at it.

-hands her 10c over-

Sorry there isn't more comment but there is a lack of feeling in these images.

No offense ment by this comment.

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DarkChyld

[Krztfr]

i know what you mean by lack of feeling. Its a very ummmm uninteresting subject matter. Also its very hard to keep a good flow and looseness when drawing with a mouse. Im more interested in technical/techniqe oriented comments.

Oh well. on to something new.

thanks.

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"How can you use my intestines as a gift?"