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Synax member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 92 Location: Halifax, NS, Canada
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 12:45 pm |
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WTF? What are you doing here? nice portrait btw...
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Jenn member
Member # Joined: 25 Jul 2000 Posts: 1055 Location: Melbourne, VIC, OZ
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 1:11 pm |
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Now, now play nice synax..
Nice picture. I am interested in seeing the end product.
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MaLoRuM member
Member # Joined: 05 Aug 2000 Posts: 208 Location: Okazaki, Japan
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 1:14 pm |
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i really like your portrait so far, the thing that gets me tho is the jacket is a little to red, and takes away from your face.
on the face, it seems a little unaligned such as your lips in line with your nose and the eyes not being at the same level.
i see you used alot of dodge and burn tools, i think it would really help improve your skills if you could try working without these and trying using different values and tones to get shadows and dark area's rather than use the dodge and burn tool set to highlights (i would use those at the end for small details maybe)
anyhow i hope this helps, i dont mean to come off negative for your first attempt thats really well done
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Vassago junior member
Member # Joined: 03 Sep 2000 Posts: 22 Location: Waseca, MN. USA
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 3:21 pm |
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Ahh come on now Synax. CounterStrike isn't the ONLY thing I model and make art for. =p
btw, where the HELL did ua go!? lol |
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 4:05 pm |
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I like, though the shoulders are tiny.
Go hard. |
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Lukias Guest
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 4:07 pm |
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Oops, I possibly viewed that incorrectly. |
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Jenn member
Member # Joined: 25 Jul 2000 Posts: 1055 Location: Melbourne, VIC, OZ
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 4:08 pm |
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Now now children.. Stop pulling each others hair..
SHOW US THE FINNISHED PIC! -beam-
-pulls out pencil and challenges you to a duel-
On guard! </french accent>
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Member # Joined: 03 Sep 2000 Posts: 22 Location: Waseca, MN. USA
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2000 11:15 pm |
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My first digital work. It's only about 40% done as well. I'm using Photoshop 5.02 and a wacom graphire 4X5 tablet.
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