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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2000 1:13 pm     Reply with quote
Does anybody have any suggestions or comments, before i start cooler this guy?
Should i change/make anything else ? thanks


edit; if u dont see it, refresh i think geocities is messed up.
thanks again



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Gecko
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2000 1:56 pm     Reply with quote
Individual body parts look good, esp. the upper half of him, but as a whole he has some issues.

His upper body doesn't seem to fit the legs. Either the waist is too wide or the shoulders are too close together? I think the feet should be more flat, they climb up too high to the ankle. Looks as if he is on his toes, but he's not.

Looking good.

edit: I think I see it now: the arms and legs are too big for the torso. That's causing it look a little odd.

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Isric
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2000 2:21 pm     Reply with quote
i wouldnt give him donkey ears, but loong elf ears
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2000 2:21 pm     Reply with quote
i wouldnt give him donkey ears, but loong elf ears (JRR Tolkien style)
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