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Topic : "Tinusch: I redid it. Everyone else look too!!!" |
minister junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 1999 Posts: 39 Location: Crown Point,IN,USA
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 7:49 pm |
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Comeone peeps reply and tell me what you think I love criticism!!
Thanks for the help Tin!
-Rob "minister" Hemphill
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minister junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 1999 Posts: 39 Location: Crown Point,IN,USA
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 8:21 pm |
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Good job rob! Comeone someone reply! I need some response! |
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sin junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Aug 2000 Posts: 40 Location: co
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 8:26 pm |
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it's bootyfyl!
the rose looks kind of fake though.
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AliasMoze member
Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2000 Posts: 814 Location: USA
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 9:14 pm |
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Edge too similar around the paper. Should see some seperation between the paper and background (in places). Turn not rendered quite right on the rose. Check your light direction. Shadow of flower looks like burn. Alter the shadow color and value. Seems like this kind of paper would have more creases. Maybe not.
Solid black background not really working with the big flat paper. Too much flat. Put something in the bg just for the sake of texture contrast. |
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Member # Joined: 09 Mar 2000 Posts: 272 Location: marlboro, NJ
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 9:51 pm |
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Some highlights would still help bro :P |
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