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psi burn member
Member # Joined: 14 May 2000 Posts: 420 Location: nj
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 7:20 pm |
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until i get my domain im usin geocities as a quick online host for testing...
well, anyhoo, this is %50 percent of the site for my exhaust webdesign site, its all flash, and im looking for comments please..
http://www.geocities.com/psi_burn/lba.htm
please, i'd like some actual feedback this time....something i never get ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/frown.gif) |
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LethargicBoy member
Member # Joined: 07 Aug 2000 Posts: 163 Location: Anacortes,WA USA
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 7:45 pm |
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I really like the visual aspect of your site, but one thing strikes me, the sounds effects dont really "match" the stuff going on screen. It seems like you went to a sound fx cd or borrowed some wavs from your favorite game , they just don't seem to fit. I would imagine more ambient low-pitched sounds to follow the speeds of things moving around on the screen.
I forgot to mention that another reason it seems screwy is that you have mechanical sounds and there really are no mechanical objects on screen.
how's that for criticism?
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psi burn member
Member # Joined: 14 May 2000 Posts: 420 Location: nj
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 7:50 pm |
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yea im just throwing around ideas for sounds, when i can make (or get, heh) some better fitting sounds ill rework them into it. |
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Member # Joined: 23 Mar 2000 Posts: 887 Location: USA
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 8:13 pm |
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Nice work! I really like the backround of it.. it's really great. But when some of the anamation was going on in the beginning.. it might be my eye's and the fact that is midnight here... but it looked like the flash backroud color and the page color didnt match... i dont know though.
One other thing that i noticed is that.. once again it might be my eye's but i couldent read some of the text... but it all looked good and i'm going to have to check it out tomorrow.. really nice work man!
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psi burn member
Member # Joined: 14 May 2000 Posts: 420 Location: nj
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 8:48 pm |
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its not your eyes.....when the image changes the bg color shifts a bit. cant figure out why its doing that.. |
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Spitfire member
Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 2009 Location: Amsterdam, the Netherlands
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 3:31 am |
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Im not a big fan of the "random polygon explosion" kind of thing you see alot these days, but your flasher is nicely executed and effective. I agree the text should be a bit larger. Good work!
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The Dude member
Member # Joined: 22 Feb 2000 Posts: 307 Location: Michigan, USA
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 4:38 am |
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Getting the background of a flash file to
match the bachground color in an HTML file
is a pain in the OSS! Sometimes this works
for me...import a 1x1 pixel gif into your
Flash movie that is the exact color that
you are using for a background in your HTML.
Place it behind everything in your movie
(Make it a symbol) and stretch it to cover
the entire movie. Like I said sometimes this
works and sometimes not. Hopefully they
address this issue with FLash 5.
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www.WorthlessFacts.com
By the way, I like the flash work.
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Transcendence member
Member # Joined: 11 Jun 2000 Posts: 242 Location: Murfreesboro, TN
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 8:40 am |
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very good..but disturbingly reminds me of Amon Tobin's site.. |
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