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psi burn
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 7:20 pm     Reply with quote
until i get my domain im usin geocities as a quick online host for testing...

well, anyhoo, this is %50 percent of the site for my exhaust webdesign site, its all flash, and im looking for comments please..
http://www.geocities.com/psi_burn/lba.htm

please, i'd like some actual feedback this time....something i never get
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 7:45 pm     Reply with quote
I really like the visual aspect of your site, but one thing strikes me, the sounds effects dont really "match" the stuff going on screen. It seems like you went to a sound fx cd or borrowed some wavs from your favorite game , they just don't seem to fit. I would imagine more ambient low-pitched sounds to follow the speeds of things moving around on the screen.

I forgot to mention that another reason it seems screwy is that you have mechanical sounds and there really are no mechanical objects on screen.

how's that for criticism?

[This message has been edited by LethargicBoy (edited August 31, 2000).]
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 7:50 pm     Reply with quote
yea im just throwing around ideas for sounds, when i can make (or get, heh) some better fitting sounds ill rework them into it.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 8:13 pm     Reply with quote
Nice work! I really like the backround of it.. it's really great. But when some of the anamation was going on in the beginning.. it might be my eye's and the fact that is midnight here... but it looked like the flash backroud color and the page color didnt match... i dont know though.

One other thing that i noticed is that.. once again it might be my eye's but i couldent read some of the text... but it all looked good and i'm going to have to check it out tomorrow.. really nice work man!

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-- Sean FitzGerald (ex)
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 8:48 pm     Reply with quote
its not your eyes.....when the image changes the bg color shifts a bit. cant figure out why its doing that..
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 3:31 am     Reply with quote
Im not a big fan of the "random polygon explosion" kind of thing you see alot these days, but your flasher is nicely executed and effective. I agree the text should be a bit larger. Good work!

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 4:38 am     Reply with quote
Getting the background of a flash file to
match the bachground color in an HTML file
is a pain in the OSS! Sometimes this works
for me...import a 1x1 pixel gif into your
Flash movie that is the exact color that
you are using for a background in your HTML.
Place it behind everything in your movie
(Make it a symbol) and stretch it to cover
the entire movie. Like I said sometimes this
works and sometimes not. Hopefully they
address this issue with FLash 5.

| The.Dude |
www.WorthlessFacts.com

By the way, I like the flash work.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2000 8:40 am     Reply with quote
very good..but disturbingly reminds me of Amon Tobin's site..
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