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Darkmoon
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 2:21 am     Reply with quote
hmmm yeah woo look more art...

i was unable to sleep this eve so i painted this...




anyways... im kinda happy with it since it wasnt my usual style
and those are gems, not warts on her face....

thanks for your comments in advance cause... im... tired...

-Lisa

Ed Note: i changed the position of the gems to a more generic place, i think it looks better, and added the blue kinda ... fantasy background....
wow 8:40 am still no sleep....
*whines*



[This message has been edited by Darkmoon (edited August 31, 2000).]
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Spitfire
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 3:00 am     Reply with quote
Damn she really looks like an intern at my last job I like the composition, though i find the 'gems' a bit distracting. IMHO she'd look better without em.
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mantis
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 3:24 am     Reply with quote
cool pic. The saturation for the gems should be adjusted, they have too much contrast b/w the general color tone of the pic.

I would make the oval a circle and make a dark orange background color.


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Chapel
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 5:59 am     Reply with quote
Looks pretty cool, but it looks like there is a gap inbetween her lips. Also, I would change the blue background to an orange one. Would make her stand out a little more.
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Darkmoon
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 6:02 am     Reply with quote
hehe see i have this little problem

i detest the colour orange

i like blue tho....

*smiles*

and i originally drew her with her lips parted a little.

-Lisa
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Frost
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 7:34 am     Reply with quote
Hey Darkmoon,

It's very nice! You're improving! =)
I agree with the comment made about the blue gems being too contrasty... in fact, too dark compared to the rest. You can keep them blue, but take out some of the black... I think it would help it out a bit.

hugs,
frost.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 8:32 am     Reply with quote
I like blue too Darkmoon. Orange brings it out more.
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