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Darkmoon member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 279 Location: Atlanta. GA.
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 2:21 am |
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hmmm yeah woo look more art...
i was unable to sleep this eve so i painted this...
anyways... im kinda happy with it since it wasnt my usual style
and those are gems, not warts on her face....
thanks for your comments in advance cause... im... tired...
-Lisa
Ed Note: i changed the position of the gems to a more generic place, i think it looks better, and added the blue kinda ... fantasy background....
wow 8:40 am still no sleep....
*whines*
[This message has been edited by Darkmoon (edited August 31, 2000).] |
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Spitfire member
Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 2009 Location: Amsterdam, the Netherlands
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 3:00 am |
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Damn she really looks like an intern at my last job I like the composition, though i find the 'gems' a bit distracting. IMHO she'd look better without em. |
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mantis member
Member # Joined: 03 Jun 2000 Posts: 359 Location: NJ/USA
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 3:24 am |
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cool pic. The saturation for the gems should be adjusted, they have too much contrast b/w the general color tone of the pic.
I would make the oval a circle and make a dark orange background color.
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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 5:59 am |
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Looks pretty cool, but it looks like there is a gap inbetween her lips. Also, I would change the blue background to an orange one. Would make her stand out a little more. |
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Darkmoon member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 279 Location: Atlanta. GA.
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 6:02 am |
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hehe see i have this little problem
i detest the colour orange
i like blue tho....
*smiles*
and i originally drew her with her lips parted a little.
-Lisa
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Frost member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 2662 Location: Montr�al, Canada
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 7:34 am |
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Hey Darkmoon,
It's very nice! You're improving! =)
I agree with the comment made about the blue gems being too contrasty... in fact, too dark compared to the rest. You can keep them blue, but take out some of the black... I think it would help it out a bit.
hugs,
frost. |
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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2000 8:32 am |
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I like blue too Darkmoon. Orange brings it out more.  |
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