[Void]

Well mr binkester...you already got some advice from me...stupid mouse

Anyway, just getting this up to the top again, and letting everyone know binkey's bday is tomorrow

[micke]

Binke,
I think the neck looks ok to me, but it's maybe the position of the head that makes it confusing.
Move the head back a bit.
The perspective on his goggles and eyes are
wrong if you compare it to the rest.
Besides from that i think it looks interresting. You have a nice green skintone going with some pink and yellow in it. looks
good! Nice technique too.

Grattis p� f�delses dagen, f�rresten
-Micke

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[Binke]

thanks for the comments! Move the head back a bit..hmm ah well I guess a little wouldnt hurt. Ahh yes, perspective on goggles are all wrong did not see that. But I don't know what you mean with the perspective being wrong on the eyes? He is looking down. But are you like meaning his eyebrows/forehead shouldnt be covering his eyelid?

Tack s� mycket! F�rhoppningsvis f�r jag min scanner o lite konstmaterial jag vill ha

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[micke]

Binke, what i meant was that his eyes have another perspective than for example the lower part of the head(mouth, cheek).
It goes in the same direction as the goggles.
I really like to show you with some lines over it, but i can't get in to my account at Katode at the moment...
While i'm at it i can see two moe things..
his underlip is covering his upper lip, it should be the other way around(most of the time)
Also his ear should be moved down a little bit.
I really like the colours on this one.

-Micke

[Fred Flick Stone]

Neck should strap into the back of the ear, you have something going to the ear, but not from the neck. Extend the neck line from the shoulder up into the bottom back of his ear. Remember, not a straight line, it is the trapezius muscle. Maybe look at an anatomy book, then tweak it a bit for the alien appeal. Is that spelled right?

[Binke]

Ehuuhmm, his neck is bothering me. He is supposed to have his head turned to (his) right, but I'm not sure if I got that right.


Also if you see anything else forked up, please do tell.

you do know what they say about strange looking green guys with big noses?

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[This message has been edited by Binke (edited August 26, 2000).]

[spooge demon]

Yes, as the head turns away, the trap begins to protrude. This is the best visual clue that the head has turned and the torso has not. The pit of the neck is an important landmark to keep track of.

[Binke]

Micke: Hmmmm ok I see,but if you get access to your ftp, I would be glad if you could show what you mean, i'm still a wee bit confused about it.
Spooge,Fred: I took a look in a mirror and I see what you mean thanks.


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