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X-pLaGue member
Member # Joined: 01 May 2000 Posts: 117
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2000 10:26 pm |
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Sorry for polluting the server with this crap, but i think this is considered digital art rite?
This is a poster(*rite spellin?*) for my school's heritage center.. but it don't really look like a proffesional *simple* poster.
n i know you guys HATE filters, budda, I don't really know how to make that focus blur effect with any of the tools..
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nova member
Member # Joined: 23 Oct 1999 Posts: 751 Location: seattle, wa
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2000 10:55 pm |
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th' overall effect is effective, but you should pay more attention to your tetxt placement/colours. for example, the text on the bottom 'the chinese high school archive' should be a whole lot lighter or darker. it would be acceptable to increase the opacity of the title text to 100%, since it is the title. that word starting with 'c' (ceutre?) should be moved down a little, so the 'u' is not intersecting hte 'g' in heritage. i like the image in the background a lot, try softening the edge between the blurred part and the non-blurred part on the bottom. (50%) blurred? corrected with the blur tool perhaps.
the above was my 2 cents
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