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MrBrian junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 43 Location: Calgary, Alberta
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 10:10 am |
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First real try at digital painting since
discovering this forum. I did it while looking in a mirror, its not an exact
likeness tho, I'm looking a bit older than in RL but it was for practice. So.. any tips? |
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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 10:19 am |
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Creepy.. we have the same name and that almost looks like me. Really nice for a first attempt. |
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silber member
Member # Joined: 15 Jul 2000 Posts: 642 Location: Berlin
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 6:50 pm |
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I like the colors and the way you looking into the mirror
unlike the others
in my opinion some stronger shadows
would do a nice job....
but still very good work
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Fred Flick Stone member
Member # Joined: 12 Apr 2000 Posts: 745 Location: San Diego, Ca, USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 7:43 pm |
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This is a really nice peice. Looks like digital pastels.
I have really nothing to add other than the usual, finish the dark side of the head.
Have you studied anywhere? Currently in school? This is a really nice spontaneous self portrait. Like the lighting a lot...  |
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MaLoRuM member
Member # Joined: 05 Aug 2000 Posts: 208 Location: Okazaki, Japan
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 7:46 pm |
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Grrrrreat colors... Juust GRRRRRRREAAAATTTT! I agree with some other comments tho, your neck looks a Tad bit Long Mr.Brian Stretch LOL seems like you painted the face, and then decided to add in the neck etc after..which might be the reason why your neck looks kind of long....
coo tho... berry berry nice.... |
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Qory member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 100 Location: Terrace, BC, Canada
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 9:12 pm |
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I really like it... you look kinda like me (although not nearly as sexy, of course)... or at least like some of my relatives. Anyways, you must have experience in other types of art, right? Well, keep up the good work... very impressive
Qory |
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AliasMoze member
Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2000 Posts: 814 Location: USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 9:22 pm |
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Very nice image, MrBrian. You've given me a couple ideas. Good job! |
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MrBrian junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 43 Location: Calgary, Alberta
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 10:42 pm |
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Thanks everybody for the replies! I really appreciate it
I spent some more time on it, smoothing it
out, adding a little more color to the skin,
shortened the neck a bit and then jammed the contrast up cuz it looked neat
Fred & Qory: I graduated from the classical animation course at the local Applied Multimedia Training Centre a year and a half ago. It was only 10 months, and kindof just touched the surface on things, but at least pointed me in the right direction.
Since theres a lack of classical work, I'm turning to video games for a job.
I'll have to post some of my 'guys in spacesuits' stuff for critique sometime, my design sense is lacking :/
[This message has been edited by MrBrian (edited August 23, 2000).] |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 11:00 pm |
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That's so cool... First attempt? How is that possible? |
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spooge demon member
Member # Joined: 15 Nov 1999 Posts: 1475 Location: Haiku, HI, USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 11:05 pm |
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!!!!
like it a lot!
The left side of your face is missing a little.
Don't change anything else.
Light and shade through color temp and not value, nice.
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aquamire member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 1999 Posts: 466 Location: duluth, mn, usa
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 11:08 pm |
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Thats very nice for a first try at a digital painting. I really like the colors.
The one thing I dont like about this pic, is the neck. If your neck really is that long, im terribly sorry if I've offended you, but you must have some pretty strong neck muscles there, heh. Also, the right ear could be a little more defined.
Nice pic in all tho.
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2000 11:41 pm |
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wow.
That's really good!
Don't have any help really...just finish
the other half of the face....
-Micke |
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2000 8:48 am |
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Looks very good! I like the way you improved it with the contrasts. It looks very realistic Maybe the neck is still a little bit too long?
Can't wait to see the finished result
-Micke
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Joachim member
Member # Joined: 18 Jan 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: Norway
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2000 9:21 am |
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really nice portrait mbrian ! And, I really like that you've made it from a mirror. That's more fun, and in a way more difficult than taking it from a picture.
And welcome to the forum btw. Though you've been here a few days now
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http://home.online.no/~j-barrum/ |
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